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July 28, 2013
By matthewclough PLATINUM, Wichita, Kansas
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“Everybody is a genius. But if you judge a fish by its ability to climb a tree, it will live its whole life believing that it is stupid.”

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My eyes have gone dizzy.
Blink once, fever pitch
Forward into spinning spirals.

Slanted keyboards dangle
From distant galaxies, these
Concrete thoughts hanging in,

Hanging on oblivion.
A final chance to grasp you,
Your broken being,

Your slurred comatose words.
Blink twice, brain carousels
Around and pivots downward.

I am very lost and all I see is
Sideways slides that shoot back
Into a puddle of your heart.

© Amanda O., Weymouth, MA

The author's comments:
This poem is about returning to a damaged relationship in a moment of weakness.
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