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Writing thoughts

November 8, 2013
By MichealMulkey SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
MichealMulkey SILVER, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"The thing about music is that, when it hits you, you feel no pain"
-Bob Marley


I
Can put my
Thoughts through
This
Pencil
Decoding
Wisps of memory
Intelligence
Wisdom
I have that power
That freedom
A freedom
That no
Man
In
A
Suit
Can take
From me
My muscles
Nerves
Bones
Joining to
Produce
A
Symphony
Through the
Sight and
Comprehension
And
Thought
Of others and
I.



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on Dec. 29 2013 at 9:06 pm
author_musical PLATINUM, Torrington, Wyoming
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Favorite Quote:
Sweetie, if you're going to be two faced, at least make one of them pretty. - Marilyn Monroe

I liked it... It felt a little hard to read since it didn't really have a complete sentence or thought in it. At least you didn't make my old mistake - I had this idea in my mind that each line of good poetry had to be the same number of words. So I'd restart a thought. Anyway, could you check out my work anybody?

on Dec. 22 2013 at 6:37 pm
Savannainthesky GOLD, West Suffield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"It may have been in pieces.. but I gave you the best of me"-Jim Morrison(the doors)

Theres just something I really like about this.. the word choice, everything. Nice job,keep writing. X

asofnow GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2013 at 3:44 pm
asofnow GOLD, Troy, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing gold can stay ~ Robert Frost

I liked the fact that the structure fit the topic. Think about taking out the "A" in there because they were kinda awkward. Good job overall.