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Thum Thum

November 11, 2013
By PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
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PiperBloo GOLD, Long Island, New York
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"there are 2 types of writer's: one that makes you think and one that makes you wonder"Brian Aldiss
"Some things i cannot change but til i try i'll never know" Wicked the musical

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There was a pounding rhythmic pressure in my head
Thum-thum
I felt like I was trapped in the crashing waves of the ocean.
Thum-thum
Being turned over, and over without being able to stop myself.
Thum-thum
I couldn’t breathe, or think.
Thum-thum
I even lost hold of your hand.
Thum-thum
I don’t remember closing my eyes but I suppose I did and I couldn’t open them again.
Thum-thum
The pressure grew louder and louder; faster and faster on the sides of my head.
Thum-thum, Thum-thum, thum, thum, thum, thumthumthum THUM, THUM THUM!
CRASH!

© Francesca Y., Robbinsdale, MN

The author's comments:
this is an excerpt from the book i'm writing on here "the epic adventures of milo and shea" if you read it you will understand the picture. i would love if you would read it! Thanks!
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