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The Fog

February 18, 2014
By cmarcon BRONZE, San Francisco, California
cmarcon BRONZE, San Francisco, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Everybody walks past a thousand story ideas every day. The good writers are the ones who see five or six of them. Most people don't see any." - Orson Scott Card


The fog is no friendly creature.
It engulfs anything in its path, clouding the vision of even the most innocent.
It surrounds the smallest things, hiding them from view.
The fog doesn’t approach those sure of themselves.
Instead it favors those who are unsure and unknowing because after all, the fog favors the lost.
The missed, the hopeless, those off-course and the vanished.
The lost find the fog just as fog finds the lost; they are peas in a pod.
Silhouettes meld into the fog, finding solace.
The solace makes people jump headfirst with need.
Given the solace, the danger is forgotten.
Stuck in the fog, people try to escape its treachery.
Escape is never found.
People drown in its milky depths.
Just before the fog is in control, fear takes over.
The fear that blinds a person into running the opposite direction, further in rather than further out.
The fog eats away until only a silhouette is left.
People forget, the fog is no friendly creature.
But the silhouettes never do.



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on Feb. 24 2014 at 9:02 am
PirateCountry DIAMOND, Muncie, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve."

I love your poem! It has a creepy feeling to it but it's also quite nice. The fog is kind of scary, isn't it? That's why I've always liked it! Good job!