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WHY MOST WE FEAR

March 10, 2014
By 12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
12gage PLATINUM, Genesee,
30 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;GODS OF WAR I CALL YOU, MY SWORD <br /> IS BY MY SIDE. <br /> I SEEK A LIFE OF HONR, FREE FROM <br /> ALL FALSE PRIDE. <br /> I WILL CRACK THE WHIP WITH A BOLD <br /> MIGHTY HAIL. <br /> COVER ME WITH DEATH IF I SHOULD <br /> EVER FAIL. <br /> &quot;GLORY, MAJESTY, UNITY <br /> HAIL, HAIL, HAIL. &quot;


Why most we fear
The light?
Too long have our people
Have
Hide in the shadows
Of the wrong
Mistakes
We have made.
Through blood
All once was
Ours,
it shall be ours again.


The author's comments:
To many of our brother's and sisters hid them selves from others. It's time that they come out and not hide themselves and be proud of who they're.

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on Jul. 7 2014 at 9:42 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
325 articles 10 photos 1165 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks

Such a wonderful poem! please continue to write!

on Apr. 21 2014 at 11:29 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

This....is perfect! First off, the title! Draws the reader into the poem before actually reading it! So simple is ur voice, and so elegant have you written! This is one of the best Ive seen! Great work!

on Mar. 26 2014 at 7:57 pm
Samtom311 PLATINUM, Delray Beach, Florida
27 articles 3 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;I worship individuals for their highest possibilities as individuals, and I loathe humanity, for its failure to live up to these possibilities.&quot; -Ayn Rand

This was a very simple, yet very elegant poem. You come straight out with your message, but you use metaphors and figurative language in order to portray it. I also absolutley love theme! It is very relatable....*claps* :D