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Your Heart Was My Home Until You Handed Me an Eviction Notice MAG

November 15, 2008
By amanda.bower SILVER, Stacy, Minnesota
amanda.bower SILVER, Stacy, Minnesota
9 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
maybe i know that you'll crave my secure arms someday, but i'll have come across someone who wasn't afraid. and that's why i can't let go.


I removed the layers of blankets from my aching bones
to excavate the secrets that were held together by saliva
in papier-mâché envelopes, only to chew on disappointments
and lie on shards of fragile stained glass that tampered with my flaws,
instead of putting me back together with multicolored duct tape
so gray was only found inside of my body.

I wrung the tears from your sweatshirt and decided it was time
to give it back to you, in exchange for my serpent heart

[barely beating,

barely breathing];
instead of curling inside your stomach and making you
nearly as ill as I had become, just by drinking venomous nectar
and digesting fireflies so a small portion of me would feel alive,
I climbed over your picket fence and let you recline my eyes
in another awkward position to the point where I only chain-smoked
the main exhibits of your aesthetic proportions and declined
every deficiency of the person you truly are,


i. blunt



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on Mar. 22 2010 at 4:45 pm
kodyz_angel PLATINUM, Onsted, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
if happiness seems more like a fantasy than a reality its because the tears are blinding you from the light that is trying to shine through
by:me

i didnt really get the ending. but i liked it for the most part.

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on Mar. 22 2010 at 2:16 pm
Ale_18 BRONZE, Monte Vista, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
A dying man needs to die, as a sleepy man needs to sleep, and there comes a time when it is wrong, as well as useless, to resist.

it was really good :)

on Mar. 22 2010 at 1:53 pm
Soft_spoken GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
if your feelings go away its not love
if that person
leaves an imprint on your heart that was love
only once
only one guy left a imprint on my heart like that i love him still -BY ME BRITTANY JENELLE

that was so nice kinda what im going through now

can you please take a look at my poetry lol no one does

on Mar. 22 2010 at 1:52 pm
VanillaDream93 SILVER, Upper Sandusky, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind."

I loved it, and your choice of words. Your strong descriptions gave me chills. The title was also pretty sweet. Good job :)

on Mar. 22 2010 at 1:11 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

i agree except for the xmas part

on Mar. 22 2010 at 1:08 pm
VampChick49 BRONZE, Tomball, Texas
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A day without laughter iz a day wasted!!!!

i agree it was not so good but keep tryin

on Mar. 22 2010 at 12:21 pm
MissFaber SILVER, Wayne, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing Less.

I LOVED THAT POEM. It's so true how we deny the deficiences of people we love. Love is blind.

commenting and rating my stuff would be greatly appreciated :)

on Mar. 22 2010 at 9:59 am
kread18 DIAMOND, Berkeley, California
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"I only chain-smoked the main exhibits of your aesthetic proportions"... best line ever! :)

how u do said...
on Mar. 22 2010 at 9:21 am
your poem is graceful and beutiful

on Mar. 22 2010 at 9:14 am
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on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:38 pm
amanda.bower SILVER, Stacy, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
maybe i know that you'll crave my secure arms someday, but i'll have come across someone who wasn't afraid. and that's why i can't let go.

aww, thank you so much ! i'm glad i could make somewhat of an impact :)

on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:37 pm
amanda.bower SILVER, Stacy, Minnesota
9 articles 2 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
maybe i know that you'll crave my secure arms someday, but i'll have come across someone who wasn't afraid. and that's why i can't let go.

thank you ! will do, i appreciate the honesty :)

on Mar. 1 2010 at 6:36 pm
amanda.bower SILVER, Stacy, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
maybe i know that you'll crave my secure arms someday, but i'll have come across someone who wasn't afraid. and that's why i can't let go.

thank you, i definitely will :) if you want, you can check out www.allpoetry. that's where i really started writing.

on Feb. 28 2010 at 10:02 pm
rebotyler44 BRONZE, Corbett, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
hate the sin, not the sinner.

the title alone is amazing. and the poem is great too. if anyone could check out my poems it'd be greatly appreciated!

holycrackers said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 6:57 pm
i like it but i think you should keep working on it

on Feb. 28 2010 at 4:16 pm
besticanbe SILVER, Edison, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"There is no substitute for hard work."
-Thomas A. Edison

great title, caught my attention.

pandagirl5 said...
on Feb. 28 2010 at 1:56 pm
that's the deepest, most painful poetry ive ever heard. THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL! ='D

on Feb. 28 2010 at 1:43 pm
TheUnknownIsBliss GOLD, East Patchogue, New York
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Favorite Quote:
I would like to stay out of the box we call "normal".

Beautiful structure. Keep writing and also check out some of my work please!!