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Death in Time by EmG

March 28, 2014
By Nerdydragon SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
Nerdydragon SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
9 articles 14 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Demons run when a good man goes to war<br /> Night will fall and drown the sun<br /> When a good man goes to war<br /> <br /> Friendship dies and true love lies<br /> Night will fall and the dark will rise<br /> When a good man goes to war<br /> <br /> Demons run, but count the cost<br /> The battle&#039;s won, but the child is lost&rdquo; <br /> ― Steven Moffat


The clock on the wall is ticking slowly,
a reminder of time.
Time, that we don't have, as the seconds pass.
Sitting here, as the hours upon us trespass.

This room smells of the chemicals
that keep the room spotless.
It is cold here, so that every being
In this room is shivering.

Small bits of light fly in through the window
as morning arrives.
It's his last day, everyone says so.
The doctors outside make noise, rushing to and fro.

A man lies on the bed before me,
frail and weak, like a withering flower.
The sorrow in the room is great,
While he is in an unconscious state.

Nurses tip-toe about, keeping quiet,
for they know he is about to leave.
Family is gathered, with tears dripping from solemn eyes
Hope. That is all there is, before he dies.

Everyone knows he is leaving us,
yet no one wishes to admit it.
Suddenly we all hear the sound of death..


His last breath.


The author's comments:
I wrote this poem for my creative writing class. I was hoping to achieve a sense a sadness, as well as how time might pass.

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on Apr. 16 2014 at 9:19 am
Nerdydragon SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
9 articles 14 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Demons run when a good man goes to war<br /> Night will fall and drown the sun<br /> When a good man goes to war<br /> <br /> Friendship dies and true love lies<br /> Night will fall and the dark will rise<br /> When a good man goes to war<br /> <br /> Demons run, but count the cost<br /> The battle&#039;s won, but the child is lost&rdquo; <br /> ― Steven Moffat

Thank you very much! :) It was something else to write.

on Apr. 15 2014 at 2:29 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart.&quot;

Beautifully written! Love the last 2 lines...wow! Takes my breath away!

on Apr. 15 2014 at 9:20 am
Nerdydragon SILVER, Wichita, Kansas
9 articles 14 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Demons run when a good man goes to war<br /> Night will fall and drown the sun<br /> When a good man goes to war<br /> <br /> Friendship dies and true love lies<br /> Night will fall and the dark will rise<br /> When a good man goes to war<br /> <br /> Demons run, but count the cost<br /> The battle&#039;s won, but the child is lost&rdquo; <br /> ― Steven Moffat

Thank you! ^-^

Starakk SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2014 at 2:36 pm
Starakk SILVER, Nowhere, Other
5 articles 0 photos 49 comments
A heart touching poem.......... I luv it