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June 23, 2014
By bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
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bella-nielsen GOLD, Marshall, Minnesota
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"autism isn't contagious, but a smile is and that's what im afraid of."-grumpy cat

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I pop a pill
I take a long draw
Of my burning cigarette
puffing smoke rings
the air is filled with them
I pick up my razor
deadly sharp
gleaming silver
I try to decide
where to cut
I choose
my upper arm
blood dribbles red
as I feel the pain
my scream echos
no one comes
no one saves me
I cry in fear
I don't want to die
then I pass away
into a better life

© Jeremy B., Austin, TX

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Xena_Zionne GOLD said...
on Sep. 22 2014 at 8:47 pm
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

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This is seriously deep. i get chills and lose my breath from reading it. _Caramel
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 10:27 pm
CreativeFreakkk DIAMOND, Spencer, Iowa
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i like how you put us inside the minds of a suicidal person  
TheComet PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 1:19 pm
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

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Awesome! very beautiful sad poem. It touched me deeply. Nice work Bella!!
Writingbee GOLD said...
on Jun. 30 2014 at 1:15 pm
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Amazing and Powerful. Sad but Moving.
Popcornjazz SILVER said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 3:47 pm
Popcornjazz SILVER, Gahana, Ohio
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Wow that's extremely.very deep you have strong words within you
Poetintraining BRONZE said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 12:59 pm
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Bella this is incredibly powerful! It gives incredible insight into the hurt of a suicidal person. However, I certianly hope this is not a suicde note.