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Your Tears

October 13, 2014
By TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”


Your Tears,

Are visceral blades of teal,

That cuts deep my chest,

Are frigid knives that vehemently stab,

Into the heart of my inky soul,

?

Your Tears

Are glacial tiffany liquids,

That wells in my eyes

- A dam of sorrow,

Before it dies,

In between the gauged creases on my chapped lips.



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on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:24 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”

And since I barely edit that, There were tides of grammar mistakes around..my deepest apology is offered to all readers

on Nov. 11 2014 at 1:21 am
TrishDestiny PLATINUM, Jerantut , Pahang, Other
45 articles 2 photos 91 comments

Favorite Quote:
“When it's over, I want to say: all my life
I was a bride married to amazement.
I was the bridegroom, taking the world into my arms.

When it is over, I don't want to wonder
if I have made of my life something particular, and real.
I don't want to find myself sighing and frightened,
or full of argument.

I don't want to end up simply having visited this world.”

Sounds like a compliment, so I would have to thank you for that. But seriously though, your English is far better than mine. It's probably that you are too self absorb and assume mine as great. And , lol your comments made my day..

on Nov. 9 2014 at 11:42 pm
Shahrier PLATINUM, Colma, California
28 articles 10 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm a river that no longer flows" - a friend
"when the people lead, leaders follow" - Gandhi

im not happy with this. i thought i was fairly good at english by now only to realize that my vocabulary doesnt even compare when up agaisnt yours.  the poem was good tho. im just not happy with you being so far ahead on me in your diction.