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Wishing For Him

October 21, 2014
By Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous


He holds part of my heart,
yet does not know it,
he’s a sweet fellow,
he who sits there,
i wish i could tell him,
how i feel,
he’s like a brother,
but more to me,
but it’d be useless,
wouldn’t it?
to tell him this,
since he’s leaving in June,
He’s a guy who understands,
he does not judge,
he understands poetry,
just like me,
and yet,
would he understand if i were to tell him?
yes,
i believe he would,
but he’d probably just apologize and leave,
leave me standing there hurt and sad,
So I won't tell him,
I’m just hiding,
within my writing,
He listens to these writings,
i know it,
But, I wish i could tell him the truth...


The author's comments:

This one is about a guy i know i like him, but i can barely talk to him, he's in my poetry club, and i'm just so happy when im around him :)


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on Oct. 29 2014 at 9:21 am
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
43 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous

Thank you, you are a wonderful writer too :)

on Oct. 28 2014 at 10:53 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

You're welcome, my friend. I'm glad that my words somehow, shine a light into a darkness - though, I don't know hpw bright the light is, I'm glad that it shines and it makes you feel better and that it touches you heart. Your heart is meant to be touched by light, not by darkness, my friend. Again, you're welcome. You are a wonderful person and writer. :)

on Oct. 28 2014 at 10:33 am
Artemis.Roe PLATINUM, Marysville, Michigan
43 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Well-behaved women seldom make history" ---Eleanor Roosevelt
"A man of words and not deeds is like a garden full of weeds." ~~Anonymous

Thank you so much! Every time, you comment it shines a light into darkness, It always touches my heart when i see your comments, i love what you say, i cannot tell you how much your comments mean to me. Thank you.

on Oct. 27 2014 at 2:11 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1486 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I can connect to this, a lot. So, so much. This is so beautifully and talentedly, well-written. I absolutely love this. You realy have a talent and greatness and light in you; and you are a wonderful and talented writer and person. You have such a power to put your emotions in your writings, it's beautiful. Thank you so much, for sharing this, my friend. :)