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An Unfettered World

November 8, 2014
By MatchaJasmine BRONZE, Delhi, Other
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For the colors of nature

can only be orchestrated,

When we don't tack our genius.

Let us fly to the seamless sky,

and be independent birds,

Out of pound,

Without spleen

and invent, discover and create

a new untrammelled world

outside us, inside us...

© Brandon T., Manila, UT

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Nature beautifies our lives, adding color to our horizons and sky.

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dazion BRONZE said...
on Dec. 8 2016 at 1:38 pm
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i like how u used your wordplay in this poem it was interesting to me and it was short and sweet
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Please check out my work and comment!
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very pretty love it continue the great work!
bambino143 said...
on Apr. 15 2016 at 9:11 am
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i think it is very beautiful i hope you will learn to fly.
Amalia said...
on Mar. 30 2016 at 4:05 pm
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I like this idea and I like the metaphorical meaning involved in the poem, maybe you could add a little more so the reader has more to enjoy. Really Good!
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metaphorically beautiful
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Love it! So short but at the same time says so much.
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I love the out doores
JennyR. said...
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good work!
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Very, very beautiful, just like nature!
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Nice poetry. check out your fellow indian's work.
PowerRangersSPD said...
on Jul. 28 2015 at 11:55 am
Really awesome
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This is just plain cools. I love poetry about nature. The call to reveling in it's beauty is immensely tempting, and I find myself wishing I were in one of my favorite little hide-aways by a lake. Well done, my friend. Peace!
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You are very talented! Keep writing!
Katy29 said...
on Mar. 24 2015 at 11:33 pm
Really good!
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I really love the way it was written! :) Great job!
David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 12:03 pm
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I believe it 2oooooo!
David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 11:57 am
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Same here!
David14 said...
on Mar. 13 2015 at 11:53 am
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really like your poems!
David14 said...
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Nice piece of writing, Jasmine11!