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Counting Down

November 14, 2014
By ShadowBlossom ELITE, Boca Raton, Florida
ShadowBlossom ELITE, Boca Raton, Florida
122 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Memento Mori- It means that nothing lasts forever, no one is immortal, sooner or later you will die and things will come to an end. It also helps you realize that while you are living you should do the most with your life, live life to the fullest.


1 o'clock, 2 o'clock, 3 o'clock, four

I can't really take this anymore

 

5 o'clock, six

Keep on throwing your stones and sticks

 

7 o'clock, 8 o'clock, nine

You know that it is almost time

 

10 o'clock, 11, twelve

Your words were always personal...



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Larkin SILVER said...
on Nov. 18 2014 at 9:54 pm
Larkin SILVER, Santa Rosa, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Our remedies oft in ourself do lie, which we ascribe to heaven.&quot;<br /> -William Shakespeare

okay. Thanks! :)

on Nov. 17 2014 at 8:12 pm
ShadowBlossom ELITE, Boca Raton, Florida
122 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Memento Mori- It means that nothing lasts forever, no one is immortal, sooner or later you will die and things will come to an end. It also helps you realize that while you are living you should do the most with your life, live life to the fullest.

Basically it was supposed to show how a person's mind was degrading due to the pain and bullying, the ridicule, the person indured.  Each piece would ryhme with the last hour, for example, four and anymore, six and sticks, nine and time, twelve and personal.  Anyway thank you for commenting and if you have any questions about my work, feel free to ask.

Larkin SILVER said...
on Nov. 17 2014 at 6:59 pm
Larkin SILVER, Santa Rosa, California
9 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Our remedies oft in ourself do lie, which we ascribe to heaven.&quot;<br /> -William Shakespeare

I think this has good potential, but I'm having trouble finding the rhythm of it.