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Melted Diamonds
November 15, 2014
See the snow,
falling down?
Bringing
the left-over coldness
that the stars
had left behind?
They're melted ---
they're melted diamonds
rolling down
on the sky's
face;
for they were
melted
in the sun's
heat.
And now,
they fall freely;
singing
and telling
of their bittersweet
sadness.
© Anna K., Portland, OR
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This article has 4 comments.
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 23 2014 at 8:54 am
Haha, I'm so glad you love, love, love this, my friend! ^_^ Haha, I have a strange imagination, but I'm glad it helps/makes you everything from a whole new perspective and you cannot get over it. Haha, and the enthusiasm is no problem at all. We need enthusiasm. Thank you so much for commenting and encouraging me, my friend! ^_^ I am so glad you loved it. ^_^
Olivia-Atlet ELITE said...
on Dec. 22 2014 at 2:33 pm
OOOOH I LOVED this!!! I absolutely adore your comparison of snow to melted diamonds! It makes me see everything from a whole new perspective, and I cannot get over it!! Oh I LOVE LOVE LOVE LLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEE THIS! Sorry for the enthusiasm, IO just really like it haha ^_^
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2014 at 8:50 pm
Haha, I have a unique imagination. XP Thank you so much, Renda my friend! For reading my poem and commenting and for encouraging me. And also! I can't wait for snow to come here too. :) Thank you, again! :)
Princess.Renda GOLD said...
on Dec. 1 2014 at 12:09 pm
I love your imagination, my dear ^^ This is verty creative and wonderfully written. I cannot wait for snow to come towhere I live too :) Keep writing, love :) And stay beautiful <3
I've just now started seeing snow and tears as melted diamonds, haha. There's no telling what my imagination can imagine or think of, haha.
Thank you for taking the time to read this. :)