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All I Need Is a Friend MAG

January 28, 2009
By Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
Ryan Moran BRONZE, Mt. Prospect, Illinois
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Books fill up my room.
Not baseball cards,
or pictures of girls,
or basketballs.
Maybe a blown up picture of …
… Pam Anderson might help.

Black-framed glasses
and a white,
pale,
lanky
body.
I should start working out.

At least I can read.
I read four books a day last summer.
The librarian,
80-year-old Mrs. Woodsworth,
she knows my middle name.
If only I had a real friend.
I am sick of seeing her old,
bony,
pale body.
Although it resembles mine.

The kids at school laugh.
Is it the way I dress?
Lacoste,
Ralph Lauren,
La Tigre.
I’ve tried every designer out there.
Staying in the house really saves me money.
My stupid rich parents give me $50 a week for lunch.
$50 times 36 weeks …
what is that?
$1,000,
$2,000,
$10,000?
I should probably know.
Straight A’s 12 years in a row
and counting.

With all of this,
or none of this –
it depends how you look at it –
all I need is a friend.



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on Apr. 9 2014 at 11:05 pm
TheAlchemicalShadow GOLD, Littleton, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Great Spirits have always encountered violent opposition from Mediocre Minds." --Einstein
"First Rule of Fight Club: you do not talk about Fight Club." --Tyler Durden
"Has anyone really been far even as decided to use even go want to do look more like?"

Is it just me, or is every positive comment on here citing an element of "relatability" as the primary reason for liking the piece? I can't relate to Keyzer Soze from "The Usual Suspects" but I still like the movie! You people are so shallow.

on Apr. 7 2014 at 8:12 pm
juliamolly BRONZE, Bedford, New York
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Favorite Quote:
It always works out in the end, if it didn't work out, its not the end.

TOTALLY feel for this and really admire this.

on Apr. 7 2014 at 2:52 pm
thatoneguythathateschool BRONZE, Jensen Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I hate poetry and school... alot

No one wants to be your friend

AlexandraL said...
on Apr. 4 2014 at 8:15 pm
AlexandraL, Melvin Ave. Northridge, California
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I love this!

on Apr. 4 2014 at 12:20 pm
Lostforever123 BRONZE, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
Never forget the good only the bad.

Its a really good peom i like it. It represents you and shows who you are. Its a really good poem keep writing.

on Mar. 31 2014 at 8:20 pm
NaomiHallS PLATINUM, Ventura, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If they cut off both hands, I will compose music anyway holding the pen in my teeth." -Shostakovich

This reminds me of myself. It's great!

on Mar. 31 2014 at 5:21 pm
Laugh_Live_Write BRONZE, Mukilteo, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if only we have the courage to pursue them." -Walt Disney

This poem is wonderful and beautifully written. I love it!

on Mar. 26 2014 at 3:52 pm
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez

I love your writing..it relates to me alot..i know im wierd and they call me a nerd but who cares atleast im me..Anyway i love the way your poem just flows its really good i cant wait to read more

on Mar. 26 2014 at 12:23 am
Red_Riding_Hood BRONZE, San Bernardino, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is impossible. The word itself says 'I'm possible'."
-Audrey Hepburn

I love this! It's very beautiful!

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on Mar. 20 2014 at 1:54 pm
hopestuur GOLD, Ladson, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Believe you can and you're halfway there.

Love this & relates to so much (:

on Mar. 10 2014 at 10:34 pm
taylorjonnelle SILVER, Ojai, California
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Favorite Quote:
"we're all alright" -That 70's show

I fell in love with this poem. You have so much talent. They way you write is so real, so relatable, and so very honest. You have a kindof quirky way of transitioning from idea to idea, yet it flows perfectly. It is really quite charming. :) I enjoyed every second that i spent reading your work! I hope there is more to come :)

on Mar. 6 2014 at 2:56 pm
Paradisaically BRONZE, Charlottesville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"I taught you to fight and to fly, what more could there be?" - J.M Barrie

Beautiful poem.  It is very relatable and it flows really well.  I love it 

on Feb. 28 2014 at 4:26 pm
MadeleineMoreland GOLD, Corvallis, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Fiction is a lie that tells us true things, over and over again"
-Neil Gaiman

Fantastic. Just... Real. Honest. Fantastic.

on Feb. 28 2014 at 1:52 am
HannaHarris GOLD, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"I've got 40 ridiculous ideas every single second and I intend to express them all." -Ezra Miller

I think this is a very solid piece of work. I really felt for you. Maybe next time you could add more emotional impact.

on Feb. 27 2014 at 9:07 pm
Trombonemack BRONZE, Easley, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I will not only use all the brains I have but, all that I can borrow." - Woodrow Wilson

It was very good although I would try making it a little more cryptic though that's just my style. :)

on Feb. 24 2014 at 10:02 am
KarenZavala BRONZE, McKinney, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If I fall asleep with a pen in my hand, DON'T remove it- I might be writing in my dreams.

-Terri Guillemets

i love the poem ^.^

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on Feb. 3 2014 at 8:10 pm
This poem is beautiful and I loved it so much. It deserved to be in the magazine and to win the contest. It describes, or can describe, almost anyone's life and I find that that is incredible. It is usually very hard to write a poem that can apply to everyone. Great job! Check out some of my poems :)

JLEIGH96 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2014 at 10:05 am
JLEIGH96 GOLD, Corydon, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Everyone is a genius, but if you judge a fish on its ability to climb it will live its entire life believing it is stupid. -Albert Einstein

I absolutely love this so much. It describes what I do all the time, but without the money. I work so I am either in my room alone reading or working.

on Jan. 23 2014 at 4:37 pm
annaliesemarie BRONZE, Menomonee Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I believe in pink. I believe that laughing is the best calorie burner. I believe in being strong when everything seems to be going wrong. I believe the happiest girls are the prettiest girls. And I believe that tomorrow is another day."

This is an amazing poem!  *loveitsomuch*

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on Jan. 17 2014 at 4:52 pm
BaileyM SILVER, Lexington, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"Happiness can be found, even in the darkest of times, if one only remembers to turn on the light."

lovelovelove this