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Habitat of Dating

April 1, 2015
By xMartin BRONZE, Daegu, Other
xMartin BRONZE, Daegu, Other
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Love never goes right.

Whenever we write

The names in the heart,

It sounds like fart.

Throughout the lives of two,

Have no love found upon themselves, too.

Dating is never fun

Because you never outrun

Someone that you love the most

Is really close

To you,

From Deja vu,

To me,

From absentee.


The author's comments:

I wrote this from top of my head, because I was bored. However, I had a mind about what love feels like. It's like you're trying to hide something during a teenager time, and friends finding about someone dating is like you will be found guilty on a trial. Feelings might be broken when it is to say goodbye, but the things that I did with that someone is like almost to the point where you're so desperate to take it back. It's like when the army is not there for community, being attacked by other country. Feelings left behind cannot be picked up.

I hoped you enjoyed this.


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on Apr. 2 2015 at 1:53 pm
passion_poet19 GOLD, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Someday i would stop wondering where i went wrong and know where i went right"

even tho this came from the top of your mind its like i can feel how you are trying to express yourself. it was really good tho.