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Jugdment

June 4, 2015
By Independent_Dreamer BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
Independent_Dreamer BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
All the things that were once forgotten scream for help in dreams.<br /> Elias Canetti


Kiss me

Under the stars 

Gazing at the moon

Wishing for a time of expression 

Kiss me under the stars

Miles away from the cruel judgments

The scrutenizing eyes of our peers

Kiss me; worry free


The author's comments:

What I felt when writing this was all of the relationships I've had and my friends have had, but were judged. Wishing that we could be with who we want to be with, whithout worrying how people are going to think about you because of that decison.


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on Jun. 16 2015 at 1:33 pm
Independent_Dreamer BRONZE, Salem, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
All the things that were once forgotten scream for help in dreams.<br /> Elias Canetti

Thanks! sometimes things just pop into my head and bounce around until I write it down. im always surprised when they turn out!

on Jun. 16 2015 at 1:24 pm
Blackjack. GOLD, Suffolk, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Take a lesson from &quot;the Greatest Man That Ever Lived,&quot; Austin Aries. The ambition and vision of one depends on how bad@ss they look in sunglasses.&quot; - Me, 2017<br /> <br /> &quot;Who is this Jose, and why is he always being denied?&quot; - Corey Graves, 2016

I think this is great! Good word structure and love theme.