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Hesitation

June 2, 2009
By Anonymous

Shaking like a leaf
I await a stronger wind
My awakening

Apprehensively,
I gaze to greener pastures
Fear pecks my conscious


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on Feb. 7 2021 at 7:54 am
WritingLover-, Lexington, Kentucky
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This is a great poem. Nice, short, to the point, not wordy. It’s my style. Do you mind looking at my poem “the sky” too?

on Oct. 16 2020 at 2:17 pm
rmswagert BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
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shaking like a leaf provides good imagery

on Nov. 11 2017 at 7:57 am
Julianna.S GOLD, Tirana, Other
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I agree. Nice job! I'll check out more of your work. On another note: Check my new story out! TeenInk.com/nonfiction/personal_experience/article/970096/The-Girl-of-the-Deep-Sea-of-Corfu/

on Nov. 28 2011 at 10:51 am
dakotawright SILVER, Oshkosh, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"Knowledge speaks but wisdom listens." - Jimi Hendrix

I loved the imagery of the words you used!

on Mar. 9 2011 at 8:24 pm
xBaByGiRrL22x PLATINUM, Pearl River, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The goal isn&#039;t to live forever, but create something that will.&quot;<br /> &quot;If you wanna go, baby let&#039;s go; if you wanna rock, I&#039;m ready to roll.&#039;&#039;<br /> &quot;No one ever said it&#039;d be easy. They just said it&#039;d be worth it.&quot; &lt;3

OMG. this is amazing

on Apr. 2 2010 at 6:13 pm
AmberRose SILVER, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Even Monkeys fall out of trees.&quot;

This is great!!! Please comment on some of my work!!! :) I would love your opinion!

on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:43 pm
StandardToaster PLATINUM, Pasadena, California
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Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t suffer from insanity; I enjoy ever minute of it.&quot;

nice this is real good. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/

on Jan. 26 2010 at 8:51 am
sammyso3 SILVER, Hastings, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We have to be continually jumping off cliffs and developing our wings on the way down.&quot; Kurt Vonnegut

I can just SEE someone peering nervously around a corner. Good imagery!

on Jan. 1 2010 at 8:38 pm
Eesha-charyya SILVER, KAUNAKAKAI, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
If she&#039;s AMAZING, she won&#039;t be EASY. If she&#039;s easy, she won&#039;t be amazing. If she&#039;s WORTH it, YOU won&#039;t give up. If you give up, you&#039;re NOT worthy... Truth is, EVERYONE is going to HURT you; YOU just got to find the ones worth SUFFERING for -Bob Marley

OMG as im reading this im picturing as if someone's waiting for the next big thing to come by & hit them & as they're waiting they jus starre at whats ahead of them.

if i got it all wrong im sorry but thats what i see; awesome amazing job keep up the good work