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Child of the Snow (Snow Angel) MAG
June 29, 2009
You spin in diamond
Pale as the snow you came from
Spring sends you away
© Susannah B., Greenwich, CT
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This article has 18 comments.
G.Spangler BRONZE said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:17 pm
This was really good, the picture just adds to the imagery. Great work! :)
bullseye575 said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:42 am
that was a good little sory the hicus are the best
Merrdestm said...
on Nov. 15 2011 at 11:29 am
I like this one because of the writers creativity.
Alfred_Ribbons BRONZE said...
on Feb. 24 2011 at 11:24 am
I love this Haiku :) But the word Diamond kind of through me off, because I always through it could be three syllables :p but I still liked it.
aKa MiSs KraZii(= said...
on May. 6 2010 at 1:19 pm
This iz cool, i like it! :-D
Girl-Writer said...
on Mar. 27 2010 at 11:01 pm
I thought these comments were supposed to be positive and constructive ;) Nice work Elizabeth. A very nice haiku - could I make a few pointers?? I'm going to anyway...
Try and create the meaning of the poem so that it skimms below the surface of the writing.
But anyway I think it's great!
samantha.rose said...
on Sep. 7 2009 at 7:09 am
of course its simple... its a haiku poem.
duh.
duh.
hotpink_girl200 said...
on Aug. 19 2009 at 7:53 pm
sweet simple and beautiful
ramnapotter PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 14 2009 at 1:31 am
Very nice. Class all the way. Read my work? Please don't hesitate to comment. Thanks.
The title of this reminded me of the Elliott Smith song "Snow Angel", so in reading it, I was almost expecting something similar just because the title sort of called that to mind. And let me tell you, I wasn't disappointed. Short, simple, to the point, but very poignant.
MorningStar15 DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 26 2009 at 1:13 am
Simple so simple! but soooo soooo beautiful...
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 21 2009 at 5:24 pm
I really love how you can say what you want to in little words. it is perfect!
yourworstnightmare BRONZE said...
on Jul. 17 2009 at 12:00 am
that was sweet and simple. nice job!
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