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Weather of the West

September 8, 2009
By Cristobal Chavez BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
Cristobal Chavez BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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Tumble weeds tumble
As twisters roar over fields
Mother Nature's fury

Rodents seek shelter
Holding each other tightly
waiting for sweet peace

Sunlight breaks through clouds
Birds sing their beautiful song
Mother Nature's grace

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CianaB GOLD said...
on Mar. 5 2017 at 11:19 pm
CianaB GOLD, Kennett Square, Pennsylvania
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I really like this poem! It's simple, yet it flows well and hold a lot of meaning. Could you possibly check out my writing? I would really appreciate it! Again, good job!

on Jul. 19 2010 at 6:39 pm
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow!! i love this!! awesome job-just really well written and fun to read-it flows together sooooo well!!! please check out my first Hiaku that i've posted on this website: True love is when...

i appreciate all comments and ratings!! P.S. ur poem is the best set of hiakus i've read on here!