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September 24, 2009
By halls SILVER, Harrison City, Pennsylvania
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A wild stallion runs
as free as can be throughout
his mighty meadow

symbol of freedom
the meadow is his peace
running and roaming.

© Ali A., Eau Claire, WI

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Katrap BRONZE said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 5:13 pm
Katrap BRONZE, Lubbock, Texas
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I agree, you should make this poem longer. It's good. :]
halls SILVER said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 2:16 pm
halls SILVER, Harrison City, Pennsylvania
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thank you so much
brianj BRONZE said...
on Oct. 17 2009 at 10:01 am
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I love the image you've painted in my mind of a stallion running through a meadow! Great topic! I think it would be a perfecy oppurtunity if you'd turn this into a longer poem so that you could describe the stallion even more. Nice work! :)