Torture | Teen Ink


September 28, 2009
By LuckieMistake PLATINUM, Florence, Colorado
LuckieMistake PLATINUM, Florence, Colorado
22 articles 1 photo 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What doesn't kill me only, will make me stronger in my head..." Papa Roach, Kick In The Teeth

Throw me into a bath of acid
Then you might be able to compete with what the others have done
I have been electricuted
I have been stretched
I have been cut but not by myself
Almost ripped limb from limb
Now that wouldn't be fun,
Now owuld it?
If I had been ripped limb from limb I wouldn't be here for you to torture
Love Me
Hate Me
Kill Me
I won't care
I can't feel any pain or emotion for others now
Go ahead
Torture me as you please

The author's comments:
I got really bored and wrote this. It seems kinda sick and twisted but I don't care. THink what you want. I can't stop you.

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on Oct. 20 2009 at 8:45 pm
bohemian_teen BRONZE, Williamsford, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back." – Barbara De Angelis
"Whenever I hear that dirty word 'exercise', I wash my mouth out with chocolate." - Anonymous
"If a dream is in your heart, you never lose it." - "Bronx Masquerade"

Superbly written, fabulously expressive, and incredibly dark... Love it!! =)

on Oct. 20 2009 at 12:15 pm
Geisbengals GOLD, West Jefferson, Ohio
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I love this poem its amazing, most poems are born bcuz some one got bored. Keep it up Dont ever let any ones opinion put u down its all about wat u feel for the poem