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This Haiku Right Here

October 8, 2010
By Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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What the front door.

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"Where is this haiku
you told me so much about?"
"This is it right here."

© Bria B.

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It just came to me. Please commentate. I love you captain.
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dia.dreamer GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 12:17 am
dia.dreamer GOLD, Kochi, Other
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&quot;I saw an angel in the marble and carved until I set him free.&quot; - Michelangelo<br /> &quot;I took a deep breath and listened to the old bray of my heart: I am, I am, I am.&quot; - Sylvia Plath

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weird how a comment anyone posts on your work follows a million sometimes... XD

and yeah, I like your haiku. it's funny. :)

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 7:24 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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awww.i am loved. much returnment my dear. you are feeling alot of lovement.
Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Jul. 28 2011 at 4:41 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love. <br /> Henry Drummond

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LOL! Hilarious! :) 

I like this haiku and I love you! :)

alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 8:13 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Haha no problem obviously

 

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 5:31 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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lessthenever. thank you for loving whatever oddness it is you're reffering to.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 4:49 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Yes just a little ha
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 4 2010 at 6:29 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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whats so odd? i was just trying to finish where i left off. actually i sort of walked off didnt I?
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 6:13 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Your so odd.....LOVE it!
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 3:57 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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haa...-ng things personally. didnt know i did that. je suis desolee.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 1 2010 at 3:00 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Taki??? What is taki???
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 29 2010 at 2:35 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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je connais. i just love taki
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2010 at 12:03 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Me too....never said I didn't like you-your shipmates abondoning your ship was but a suggestion
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2010 at 11:13 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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pourquoi? tu n'aimes pas moi n'est-ce pas? comment est-ce que tu ne veux pas etre le captain? The only shipmates i ever had were inside my head, and i suppose they have abandoned me.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2010 at 10:59 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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I don't captinate haha

What's wrong with your ship you ask? Your shipmates may have abandoned it

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2010 at 10:37 am
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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still the captain, you just dont captainate anything. hey, whats wrong with my ship?
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 28 2010 at 10:31 am
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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suppose i don't wish to command this ship....i am.......?
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 9:08 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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-command. je suis desolee.
Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 9:07 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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you're the captain. if you wish to commad this ship.
alanacarlene DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 7:36 pm
alanacarlene DIAMOND, Mexia, Texas
55 articles 15 photos 592 comments

Favorite Quote:
Silence screams too honestly and loudly.<br /> -Alex (aka GangstaEyes)<br /> Freedom is the freedom to say that two plus two equals four.<br /> -Winston Smith &#039;1984&#039;<br /> Don&#039;t go wishin&#039; your life away...<br /> -Daddy S2<br /> &quot;What a drag it was to be limited by reality.&quot;

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Question: what's captain....or who

Still the curious cat

Boosflash DIAMOND said...
on Nov. 27 2010 at 6:39 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Quoi? merci captain. Je t'aime.