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Rain . . .

October 20, 2010
By Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."


Falling on earth
Speeding, running, rushing
Giving new birth!


The author's comments:
I dont write Haikus very often .. thought this was a good one :)

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BurnHem said...
on Nov. 26 2010 at 11:32 am
You're beyond welcome!  Are you kidding? I dont like your work I LOVE IT!

Shahed GOLD said...
on Nov. 23 2010 at 4:48 pm
Shahed GOLD, Tulsa, Oklahoma
16 articles 2 photos 350 comments

Favorite Quote:
"People are like tea bags, they don't realize their own strength until they're dropped in hot water "
“People are often unreasonable and self-centered. Forgive them anyway.
If you are kind, people may accuse you of ulterior motives. Be kind anyway."

Thank you!! :) I apprciate you commenting on all my work it shows how much you liked it! Thanks!

BurnHem said...
on Nov. 22 2010 at 4:08 pm

It rhymed beautifully and at the same time is was completely meaningful! 

This is good