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Ribbons of Thought

June 12, 2011
By SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
SecretFlame PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"I have a life. I just choose to ignore it."
-one of my friends

The ribbons of thought,
Twining into ideas,
Now become actions.

The author's comments:
I got this poem from the thought of how thoughts twist like ribbons and then braid into ideas, and ideas become actions.

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This article has 24 comments.

on Jul. 9 2011 at 10:43 am
Poetryfaces SILVER, Brooklyn, New York
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I love the tittle. And the word twining vrs twisting really gives a nice ring to the haiku. :)

alex198 said...
on Jul. 8 2011 at 9:16 am
alex198, |, Other
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I loved this. It's a really nice idea :)

on Jul. 6 2011 at 3:17 pm
writer_girl SILVER, Stuart, Virginia
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Great haiku! Great job!

on Jul. 6 2011 at 3:13 pm
CieraDesiree GOLD, Hagerstown, Indiana
17 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
An eye for an eye only makes the whole world blind.
You never know what you have until it's gone.

This is a really neat thought. I like it=)