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Not Alone

July 10, 2011
By redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"


I feel all alone
Then you whiz over to me
My hummingbird friend



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sakina GOLD said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 12:47 am
sakina GOLD, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
A negative thinker See's a difficulty in every opportunity but a positive thinker sees an opportunity in every difficulty. So always think positive and u'll surely B successful in LIFE.
-Hazrat Ali (A.S)

U've got a nice imagination and lot's of talent...:)Keep it up...;)

austenite GOLD said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 11:11 pm
austenite GOLD, River Falls, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
...one word from you will silence me forever. If, however, your feelings have changed, I will have to tell you: you have bewitched me, body and soul, and I love....I love...I love you. I never wish to be parted from you from this day on. -Mr. Darcy

I really like this :) Hummingbirds are so beautiful - I can totally picture it, even though it's a three line haiku!

on Jul. 13 2011 at 8:10 pm
BrightBurningCampeador PLATINUM, Portland, Oregon
42 articles 11 photos 333 comments
I am not a big fan of haiku, but this is really good. And I know I'm repeating the first two comments, but I love the word "whiz". I think it's spelled with two z's though. :)

on Jul. 13 2011 at 5:38 pm
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
16 articles 5 photos 151 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I would like to be remembered as a woman who did the best she could with the talent she had."

^^ I agree with him, loved the word whiz!

Very nice as well!


alex198 said...
on Jul. 13 2011 at 3:17 pm
alex198, |, Other
0 articles 0 photos 113 comments
I love that you used the word whiz here. It's a perfect use of the word for describing a hummingbird flying :) This is a really good poem! Well done!