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September 27, 2011
By collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
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A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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The Rainbow after
The storm is you, giving me
The hope to move on.

© Jamie U., West Hempstead, NY

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Just now, an image in my head just came to me, like a movie screen turning on, and then the words, in less than a minute. Hope you enjoy this! :)
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so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 10:01 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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Magnificent. One of the best haikus I've ever read. Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!
so_joy SILVER said...
on Aug. 16 2012 at 10:01 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
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&quot;Be the change you want to see.&quot;

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Magnificent. One of the best haikus I've ever read. Please read,rate,and comment on my poems! Thanks!
hippiechick99 GOLD said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 3:59 pm
hippiechick99 GOLD, Mesquite, Texas
11 articles 0 photos 224 comments

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&quot;... How dreary to be somebody-- How public like a frog;<br /> To tell one&#039;s name; the livelong June-- To an admiring bog&quot;<br /> -Emily Dickinson

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I have to say that usually I don't like limereks...but I really love yours. They make me think about poetry more than I usually would.
teamo14 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 18 2012 at 1:48 pm
teamo14 BRONZE, Paris, Other
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I love it!
VandalSpirit DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 10:07 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 185 comments

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Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

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Me and my dad against my mom and bro. But I do give the Packers some credit; they do deserve that much.
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 9:08 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

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A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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lol my dad is a Bears fan, and my mom and me are Packer Backers....so yeah u can say it can pretty bloody at my house!! lol
VandalSpirit DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 8:06 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 185 comments

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Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

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Hey my reply isn't coming through but basically....no.
VandalSpirit DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 8:06 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 185 comments

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Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

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.......I won't say they s.uck like most Bears fans would.
VandalSpirit DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 8:01 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 185 comments

Favorite Quote:
Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

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........I won't say they s.uck like most Bears fans would say, but my family is split in half when it comes to football.
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 4:26 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

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A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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Awesome!!! ANd thanks!! :) Are you a Packers fan??
VandalSpirit DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 30 2011 at 9:07 pm
VandalSpirit DIAMOND, Pleasant Prairie, Wisconsin
51 articles 9 photos 185 comments

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Yet this I call to mind and therefore I have hope: Because of Gods great love, we are not consumed. His compassion never fail. They are new every morning; great is your faithfulness.

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Hey so I was looking through comments by people on my work and I noticed you commented on mine and I noticed on your profile you're from Wisconsin (like me) Jus' saying. Anyway I usually don't like haikus but I did like this one. Nice job!
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Dec. 29 2011 at 8:19 am
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

Favorite Quote:
A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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And I love the positive feedback!! I'm glad you liked my haiku. :)
Sprinkle.The.World.With.Glitter said...
on Dec. 28 2011 at 8:25 pm
Sprinkle.The.World.With.Glitter, Las Vegas, Nevada
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I &hearts; Art

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I ♥ It! :D
collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 9:03 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

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A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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You're sweet, Pookie and Naman!! :) Thanks so much for commenting! It really means a lot to me. Merry Christmas! :D
PookieBooski PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 19 2011 at 7:27 pm
PookieBooski PLATINUM, Springfield, Illinois
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This is sweet :)
Naman BRONZE said...
on Dec. 16 2011 at 12:42 pm
Naman BRONZE, Ghaziabad, Other
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What you believe is what you become!!

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Short and sweet!!

Though I would have loved it even more had it been a little longer!

collegegirladventures GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 6:25 pm
collegegirladventures GOLD, Mequon, Wisconsin
10 articles 8 photos 307 comments

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A poet&#039;s work is to name the unnameable, to point at frauds, to take sides, start arguments, shape the world, and stop it going to sleep.<br /> <br /> ~Salman Rushdie

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thanks carrieann! :) i like ur work too. Please check out and rate/comment on my other work..i even have some photography....merry christmas!! :)
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 6:22 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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Excellent work!  It really rings true and you used the proper amount of syllables.  I really have no criticism, so great work and keep writing!
Zxarra GOLD said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 5:44 pm
Zxarra GOLD, Fitzwilliam, New Hampshire
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Earth without art is &quot;eh&quot;

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Hey you're right about the 2nd line thing... but the poem doesn't have to be a haiku. It could be free verse. Anyway, it doesn't really matter because the poem gets the message across.
Hannibal_the_Vegetarian_Cannibal SILVER said...
on Dec. 12 2011 at 4:22 pm
Hannibal_the_Vegetarian_Cannibal SILVER, A Nice Place In, Virginia
7 articles 2 photos 43 comments

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&quot;Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass; it&#039;s about learning to dance in the rain.&quot; ~Anonymous<br /> <br /> <br /> &quot;For he loved her, as you can only love someone who is an echo of yourself in your time of deepest sorrow.&quot; ~ Orson Scott Card

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Love it! If this is a haiku, I think the 2nd line has one too many beats, but that's a minor thing. Otherwise, it's great! :)