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Battle of love

December 26, 2011
By Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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Love is a battle
A war of pain and hurting
Only time will heal pain

© Ruth C., Pleasanton, TX

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Crazymexican GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 9:46 pm
Crazymexican GOLD, Jay, Maine
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Yea had a hard time of thinking of another word. Probably going to do some more of these. Thanks for the advice though
eliana924 GOLD said...
on Jan. 2 2012 at 8:14 pm
eliana924 GOLD, New York, New York
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Good job, especially because haikus are hard because they're short and have a strict number of syllables. Although be wary of repeating words like "pain."