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January 2, 2012
By Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

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Tears of frustration
Run down my cheeks because
You left without me

© Becky G., Westerville, OH

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beautifulspirit PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:06 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.<br /> --Eleanor Roosevelt

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I love that the haiku is really one sentence. It adds to its simplicity. And the poem is not so specific---like the speaker is upset because of a bad breakup or anything. Everyone can relate to lost or feeling sadness---it's universal.
Lucero3 SILVER said...
on Feb. 3 2012 at 3:45 pm
Lucero3 SILVER, Bellevue, Washington
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&quot;Whether you think you can or think you can&#039;t, you&#039;re right.&quot; -Henry Ford

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I love it! It is so simplistic, which is awesome, because it is very to the point. Yet it still manages to convey what you are trying to get it:) Keep writing!