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Wormhole
November 7, 2012
When matter falls in,
It breaches the shields of space;
Let us ride the flow.
© Jennifer K., Richmond, CA
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PaigeStreet PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 20 2012 at 3:24 pm
I love the unusual subject! You use an old form to write a new idea, which is great. It also opens up the opportunity for more. Looking at a flower is a self-contained event, but falling into a wormhole invites possibility and tension. My only critique in this piece is the plurality of shields. What is the metaphor of many barriers? Wouldn't it work just as fine with the simpler metaphor of space being a "sheild" all by itself?
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