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December 30, 2012
By KristaLove BRONZE, Tamuning, Other
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I watch as they fall
How content they seem to be
Once they kiss the Earth

© Elaina B., Waterloo, NY

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comfortablynumb7 said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 10:43 pm
comfortablynumb7, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" You want too much. you expect too much then when your hero disappoints you, your poor little heart gets crushed" <another quote>"If you don't earn respect when you're alive, you don't deserve it when you're dead."

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Thats whats called a haiku.
theatregirl PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 2 2013 at 2:37 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
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&quot;To thine own self be true,&quot; -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.<br /> &quot;I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man.&quot; - Thomas Jefferson

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I like your poem but I only gave 3 star because it so short. The ideas should really be expanded upon
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 1 2013 at 6:32 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
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The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

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Those are some very nice words!  Love it!
ladybugsrock SILVER said...
on Jan. 1 2013 at 5:56 pm
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
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I like the word choice you used! Ive never heard anyone describe rain like you did! Excellent! Please read, comment, and rate some of my poems too! I would appreciate it:) thanks
HouseofYork GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2013 at 1:56 pm
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Short and to the point with imagry on top. Very nice