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Rain MAG

December 30, 2012
By KristaLove BRONZE, Tamuning, Other
KristaLove BRONZE, Tamuning, Other
3 articles 1 photo 0 comments

I watch as they fall
How content they seem to be
Once they kiss the Earth

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This article has 5 comments.

on Jan. 2 2013 at 10:43 pm
comfortablynumb7, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
" You want too much. you expect too much then when your hero disappoints you, your poor little heart gets crushed" <another quote>"If you don't earn respect when you're alive, you don't deserve it when you're dead."

Thats whats called a haiku.

on Jan. 2 2013 at 2:37 pm
theatregirl PLATINUM, Lathrup Village, Michigan
30 articles 12 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To thine own self be true," -from Hamlet, a play by Shakespeare.
"I have sworn on the altar of god eternal hostility against all forms of tyranny over the mind of man." - Thomas Jefferson

I like your poem but I only gave 3 star because it so short. The ideas should really be expanded upon

on Jan. 1 2013 at 6:32 pm
WaffleOcean2934 PLATINUM, Rogers, Minnesota
42 articles 9 photos 116 comments

Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams-Eleanor Roosevelt

Those are some very nice words!  Love it!

on Jan. 1 2013 at 5:56 pm
ladybugsrock SILVER, Billings, Montana
6 articles 0 photos 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Do not go where the path may lead; go instead where there is no path and leave a trail."
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

I like the word choice you used! Ive never heard anyone describe rain like you did! Excellent! Please read, comment, and rate some of my poems too! I would appreciate it:) thanks

on Jan. 1 2013 at 1:56 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

Short and to the point with imagry on top. Very nice