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February 10, 2013
By ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
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"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

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Precipice of my
mouth, gasping for oxygen,
soil in return.

© Tim S., Great Falls, VA

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KarmaBites GOLD said...
on Mar. 22 2014 at 11:10 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Thank you for being such a good friend, hehe. I had to change all of my info. I can explain in the forums: TeenInk.com/forums?act=post&topic_id=16&thread_id=78975
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 7:13 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

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From a gifted writer such as yourself, these words truly make my day brighter. Thank you for being a good friend :)
KarmaBites GOLD said...
on Mar. 20 2014 at 9:59 am
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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Superb word choice! Congrats on getting published, Chris! You are one of the most talented writers on Teen Ink. Never stop writing!
Mckay ELITE said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 5:07 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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Your dedication shows. And that is a very scary fear. Just imagining it makes me shudder. 
ChrisJ PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 31 2013 at 2:32 pm
ChrisJ PLATINUM, Rochester, New York
24 articles 15 photos 289 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Man must evolve for all human conflict a method which rejects revenge, aggression and retaliation. The foundation of such a method is love.”
- Martin Luther King Jr.

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Being buried alive is really my biggest fear, and that was the inspiration behind this piece. This poem, for me, took alot of thought and concentration to write, thank you very very much for the kind words.
Mckay ELITE said...
on Jul. 30 2013 at 3:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

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Frightening to imagine. Yet quite exhilarating all at once. Very well written.