Dusk____ | Teen Ink

Dusk____

September 30, 2013
By GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments

The night picks away
The glowing orb like a scab
Leaving blood behind.



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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on Oct. 3 2013 at 7:20 pm
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
170 articles 122 photos 391 comments
Thanks. I really need to stop writing so many haikus about sunsets, but its kind of addictive. :)

on Oct. 3 2013 at 10:21 am
TargonTheDragon GOLD, Ofallon, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
First dentistry was painless.
Then bicycles were chainless,
Carriages were horseless,
And many laws enforceless.

Next cookery was fireless,
Telegraphy was wireless,
Cigars were nicotineless,
And coffee caffeineless.

Soon oranges were seedless,
The putting green was weedless,
The college boy was hatless,
The proper diet fatless.

New motor roads are dustless,
The latest steel is rustless,
Our tennis courts are sodless,
Our new religion — godless.

thats its good. i think this is my favorite haiku of yours now.