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Blues

March 17, 2014
By Cindy152 SILVER, Medan, Other
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Cindy152 SILVER, Medan, Other
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I'm kinda over getting told to throw my hands up in the air. So there.

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I am the clouds in your sky
without me
you're just blue

© Joseph B., Mesquite, TX

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Treasure those you have around now.
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EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 24 2014 at 2:42 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
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To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

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Really good. And you're right, treausure those you have around you now. Thanks for sharing this. 
Cindy152 SILVER said...
on Mar. 26 2014 at 7:26 am
Cindy152 SILVER, Medan, Other
8 articles 0 photos 8 comments

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I'm kinda over getting told to throw my hands up in the air. So there.

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Oops! It was my first time writing a haiku :s thanks though! :)))
KarmaBites GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2014 at 9:37 pm
KarmaBites GOLD, Columbia Heights, Minnesota
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How clever! This poem deserves more recognition! However, the syllable pattern for haikus is 5-7-5. I love this poem regardless!
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 25 2014 at 6:45 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

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Ryan and Dan are amazing and lana and Lorde are great as well!!! Your welcome! If you ever need any advice I will be glad to give it :)
Cindy152 SILVER said...
on Mar. 24 2014 at 7:00 pm
Cindy152 SILVER, Medan, Other
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I'm kinda over getting told to throw my hands up in the air. So there.

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thanks liv! I appreciate it :) Yeah I've just started listening to them (Lana and Lorde) and I love them so much! I think Ryan Tedder is brilliant and Dan is amazing :))
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 24 2014 at 5:43 pm
Laugh-it-Out PLATINUM, Brooklyn, New York, New York
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"Do not go gentle into that good night. Rage, rage against the dying of the light" --Dylan Thomas

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First off, just wanted to say i like your bio. Is that Lorde? I think yes :) Anywho, i really liked this Haiku, really simple but true. Also, back to your bio, Imagine Dragons are my life as well as One Republic. Lorde is beast and Lana is amazing! The Fault In Our Stars speaks for itself and...ya lol Im gonna stop now :) Nice poem! Keep rockin, Liv