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Disjointed Haiku

May 24, 2014
By I.Mari SILVER, Cortlandt Manor, New York
I.Mari SILVER, Cortlandt Manor, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Comparing yourself to others is an act of violence against your authentic self."


I feel so strange. You

make me so nervous. Please stop

doing this to me.


The author's comments:
While this haiku was originally intended to express the romantic tension that may blossom between two individuals, it is also open to interpretation. The words could be viewed in a darker light, like the discomforted thoughts of a lone individual walking home at night.

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on May. 29 2014 at 9:36 am
Eno_Bladez GOLD, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
it'll be okay, if it's not okay it's not over.

i really veiwed this as the uncomfortable feeling you get when you're with someone you have strong feelings for and you don't know how to act or what you can do without messing up so you're all tight and anxioius lol  i liked thie Haiku a lot. it spoke a lot in a few words and that's not always an easy things to do.