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November 11, 2014
By The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
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"Nothing is impossible. The word itself says 'I'm Possible'"

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thoughts floating around
wait it’s gone I just forgot
everything is rot

© Amanda P., Garden Grove, CA

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Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2015 at 6:30 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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I see, thank you very much, and you're welcome.
The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2015 at 4:36 pm
The_DoctorDonna PLATINUM, Anytown, Iowa
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In the last line, I intended to convey the frustration of forgetting something. Thanks for letting me know that it didn't make sense (and I really mean that) because sometimes I get ahead of myself, thinking it makes sense, only to discover that nobody else gets it. So thank you. :)
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 1 2015 at 12:02 pm
Allen. PLATINUM, Palo Alto, California
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Favorite Quote:
[i]No matter how much people try to put you down or make you think other things about yourself, the only person you can trust about who you really are is you[/i] -Crusher-P

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Good job on capturing forgetfulness here. However, I think I don't understand the last line and how rot relates to the rest of the haiku. I think you could possibly change it to something different to keep it in tune with the rest of the haiku.