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February 28, 2018
By LittleRedDeliriousPrince SILVER, Parma Heights, Ohio
LittleRedDeliriousPrince SILVER, Parma Heights, Ohio
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how to handle the
sounds of a broken heart:
just plug your ears, love

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C BRONZE said...
on Mar. 2 2018 at 4:47 pm
C BRONZE, Wolcott, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
Always stand up for what you believe in, even if it means standing alone.-Kim Hanks

This is nice, but the first letter not capitalized is bothering me, and this does not follow the 5-7-5 rule of a haiku. Excellent message. Try a free verse poem about the same topic, but go a bit deeper, and write longer. This poem looks like it could have a potential author; I encourage you to continue writing and getting people's opinions. Of course, I know nothing of your life, and if you're already doing these things, that is amazing. You have given me an idea for a future poem. I wish you the best in life. (P.s. I encourage rhyming, arguably the best part of a poem, but never force it.)

on Mar. 1 2018 at 12:16 pm
TabithaL SILVER, Suffolk, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Speak only if it improves upon the silence"- Mahatma Gandhi

This was very real. It worked for me. Good job.