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be my hero

September 19, 2009
By ford fred BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
ford fred BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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What Id give for a hug..

A hug that stops everything
A hug that lasts forever
Mends a broken heart, colder thicker blacker than leather
A kiss that tends the crippled wing
An ear that listens that hears me sing
Suffer in silence and stifle your screams
Cry till your eyes bleed then you’ll know what real pain means
Nothing in your power will ever make me whole
The world is to busy heart black as coal
Your uncleansed mind couldn’t possibly think
Ull never understand therefore I must drink
Stop the pounding pain
Wash these tears this salty rain
A pull of a trigger, a plunge of a knife
Please take the bullet and save my life
Be a hero and take a stand
My life is passing so take my hand
My body shivers my soul is cold
You’ve been there with me from young to old
Hug me tight and don’t let go
Tell me you love me just let me know

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keana BRONZE said...
on Aug. 7 2011 at 4:42 pm
keana BRONZE, Alta Vista, Kansas
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this is great i love it

on Jun. 24 2011 at 6:13 am
-hannah- SILVER, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The books that help you most are those which make you think that most. The hardest way of learning is that of easy reading; but a great book that comes from a great thinker is a ship of thought, deep freighted with truth and beauty."

Really really good! :D

on Mar. 6 2011 at 10:31 pm
whateverjuliet BRONZE, Miami, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
true love never dies,it only gets stronger with time.

i absolutely love it!

FranklinBush said...
on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:18 am
FranklinBush, Cleveland, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
If your early your on time, If u on time u late, If your late THATS not acceptable......If your not First your last

great job this really made me think keep it up

on Oct. 25 2010 at 10:40 am
lovemeloser59 BRONZE, Los Angeles, California
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This is Really really good... Your Amazingg <3 (:

on Feb. 19 2010 at 11:09 am
BeautifulSoul BRONZE, Toledo, Ohio
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I really enjoyed this poem, like really. You put so many images in my mind and it helped explain the poem. Greatly appreciated, I promise.

on Dec. 30 2009 at 4:50 pm
ford fred BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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thank you that means alot :)

on Nov. 18 2009 at 11:22 pm
Writing_Hippie BRONZE, Eatonville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
It's all about choices!

Wow! I love it! =)