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Bleed [A Song]

July 7, 2009
By KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments

Just Let Go.

Did you see me?
Did you see me cry?
Will you watch me?
Will you watch me die?


Did you love me?
Or was it a lie?
Did you need me?
Or was I just a good time?

Well Now.
We’ll find out.
I stand here.
Split Open.
Tears Streaming.
Blood Flowing.


As I,
Will you just watch
Will you walk
Or will you stop the
Darlin’ will you


Crimson red.
Color of roses.
Color of death.

Hold me or let me go?
No more games,
Ive got to

Come on Come on.
You gonna stop the flow?
Come on Come on.
Let me know.
Don’t have much time.
Tell me please,
Before I die.

Wont you hold me close?

As I
I cant
As I
As I,

Don’t Leave Me In The Dark…

The author's comments:
Once Again, this is a it may be written to indicate how some parts wound be sung...such as the word in all caps , they would be screamed rather than sang.

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This article has 181 comments.

on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:49 am
Yawb...sounds like my life story... I love it... </3

on Nov. 15 2009 at 1:44 pm
awesome. sounds like its got a rockin' beat and... a lot of screamin. keep writin.

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:07 pm
emjay1216 SILVER, Eugene, Oregon
6 articles 3 photos 29 comments

Favorite Quote:
Often times, the test of courage is not to die, but to live.
~ Vittorio Alfieri

that was bomin' i loved it!!

i write songs too

Schubster said...
on Sep. 27 2009 at 7:17 pm
GREAT SONG!!! I wish I could hear it sung, too.....and I wish I could write songs at all. haha, keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

check out my work?

on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:02 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
4 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
iam the greatest dork!!

i could feel ur pain like it was my own i started crying cause i want to know if he really even loved me but wow this is great

on Sep. 15 2009 at 5:33 pm
RadioShower PLATINUM, Rio Rancho, New Mexico
23 articles 5 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Emo is imaginary - Gerard Way
Normalness leads to sadness -Phil Lester (AmazingPhil)

Wow that was intense! GO YOU! Wish i could hear it sung.

GLee said...
on Sep. 13 2009 at 12:52 pm
nice. i like it

on Sep. 13 2009 at 11:13 am
AngelForeverBleedingLove DIAMOND, Frederic, Wisconsin
65 articles 3 photos 248 comments

Favorite Quote:
You say you don't remember,
But I will never forget

This is beautifully written. I can feel your words, and that is a good thing when you write a song. Bravo!

on Sep. 13 2009 at 2:07 am
LaLaLexy BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Never give up on someone you can't go a day without thinking of.

I really liked these lyrics! It appears very alt. rock to me! I really like it! I could like totally feel your pain!

Fangz PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 11 2009 at 7:46 am
Fangz PLATINUM, Ware, Massachusetts
37 articles 15 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
In necessariis unitas, in dubiis libertas, in omnibus caritas.

Pretty decent. Sounds like a song for the electric harmonica.

Pinky BRONZE said...
on Sep. 10 2009 at 4:48 pm
Pinky BRONZE, Hopkinsville, Kentucky
1 article 0 photos 3 comments
I absolutely love it. I wish I could write songs, but unfortunately, I can't. :P I wish I had your talent. :)

on Sep. 10 2009 at 2:22 pm
antionette12345 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
3 articles 0 photos 1 comment
i really like this i just wanted to know could you write me a song and sent it to jalen123_2009@YMAIL.COM.

on Sep. 8 2009 at 4:57 am
kaylababy07 BRONZE, Chapin, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"love is needing someone.
love is putting up with someone's
bad qualities because they somehow
complete you." -sarah dessen.

wow, i wish i could write like this.

it is really good :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 12:10 am
KassyElizabeth DIAMOND, Argyle, New York
65 articles 14 photos 30 comments
according to my friends, my music teacher, and the one soloist competition I have been in I have a decent voice. I cant honestly tell you either way whether im good or not, im basically my greatest critic...Im a bit rough on this song because its mostly kind of screamo......and thats something i have to work on...but thanks for the comment glad u liked it and glad you think itd be something you would listen to =]

sadie912 said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 9:06 pm
luv this!sounds like something i would listen 2. can u sing tho??jw

on Sep. 4 2009 at 2:22 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

i'm kinda disappointed other people got to this piece before me...because they have already said everything there is to say about this piece :) it is truly amazing, awesome, excellent, deep, heartfelt...and sooo much more <3 it is just so great, so sad and sooo touching. sorry my comment is so long, i just want you to know how awesome of a writer you seem to be!!

on Sep. 4 2009 at 8:32 am
SImplyMe* BRONZE, Pretoria, Wyoming
4 articles 0 photos 3 comments
i cant say more then what the other people said, but this piece is extraordinary, every word drips with emotion, its my biggest aspiration 2 be this good!

ACooke GOLD said...
on Sep. 3 2009 at 7:09 am
ACooke GOLD, Ihiohh, New Jersey
16 articles 0 photos 31 comments
ah-mazing!!!! there was so much emotion behind the words and the capitol letters did a good job showing how the words meant more. good job, please consider reading my work

Lonleydandy said...
on Jul. 15 2009 at 2:34 pm
WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW. It was really good, it has so much emotion behind it. WOW....WOW....WOW....WOW!!!!!!!

on Jul. 13 2009 at 5:33 pm
PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 27 comments

Favorite Quote:
I think therefore I am

wow thats a good song, its got so much emotion. good job!