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Crush

August 26, 2009
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


I know you don't notice me,
Don't even know that i exsist.
But, in all of my dreams, you're in "Bop" magazines
You're face is so precious and perfect to me
And i don't care about you're flaws, you're my fantasy..
I go crazy thinkin' about
Just wanna (to be continued)


The author's comments:
This song i wrote is very special to me :)

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Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 4:12 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks :) for the comment

on Dec. 18 2009 at 12:29 pm
wanghui138138 BRONZE, Providence, Rhode Island
4 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't fear anything other than giving up."

i like it! make it more original tho. good work

on Nov. 17 2009 at 2:22 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
9 articles 1 photo 213 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

yes please,please,please finish it!!! :]

mDawg said...
on Nov. 17 2009 at 12:38 pm
Aww, this was cute. Finish it!

on Nov. 17 2009 at 10:20 am
debbieeee BRONZE, Port Washington, New York
2 articles 2 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
We ignore the ones who adore us,
adore the ones that ignore us,
love the ones that hurt us, and
hurt the ones that love us.

i love it :] very creative.

lindsey said...
on Nov. 16 2009 at 1:52 pm
I wrote almost the same poem, and honestly this poem is so true!! Ilove it!

on Nov. 15 2009 at 3:45 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
29 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing, I think, is not apart from living. Writing is a kind of double living. The writer experiences everything twice. Once in reality and once in the mirror which waits always before or behind."

ok, i agree. i didn't even say why i didn't like it so i guess it would be different if i had.

on Nov. 15 2009 at 11:42 am
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
You have somewhat of a point.. but it just makes more sense to keep your negative comments to yourself.. its not like your giving them any advice.. that would be different

on Nov. 11 2009 at 6:28 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
29 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing, I think, is not apart from living. Writing is a kind of double living. The writer experiences everything twice. Once in reality and once in the mirror which waits always before or behind."

what's the point of feedback if it's all positive? feel free to critique all of my work. that's why i put it up on this website. so ppl can tell me what's bad about it, not just that it's good.

on Nov. 11 2009 at 1:44 pm
KelsiLynn15 SILVER, Dell Rapids, South Dakota
5 articles 0 photos 22 comments
Don't be too honest.. If your going to post a comment on someones work.. be respectful, and don't put down the author

meggers SILVER said...
on Nov. 10 2009 at 10:50 am
meggers SILVER, San Angelo, Texas
5 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
if u cant say something nice then dont say anything at all

wow i like it you should read the poem i posted called crush its the truth on wat a crush feels like

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 26 2009 at 2:51 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

yeah, i looked at that song, i thought it was great!:) If you wanna see the rest of the song, just click more by this author, and then click on "Precious" :)

on Oct. 13 2009 at 12:32 pm
amanda727 PLATINUM, Salt Lake City, Utah
33 articles 2 photos 245 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't let anybody tell you who you are; don't let anyone tell you that you don't deserve what you're willing to work for.
Never give up; you\'ll never know how far you could go until you try to get to where you want to go.

It's pretty good...you should finish it lol you should comment me too! I'm number 6 or something like that...it's called Never Underestimate a Girl :)

on Oct. 11 2009 at 10:19 pm
yaelephant5 PLATINUM, Potomac, Maryland
29 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Writing, I think, is not apart from living. Writing is a kind of double living. The writer experiences everything twice. Once in reality and once in the mirror which waits always before or behind."

i'll be honest... i'm not a huge fan of this. its fine but nothing incredibe.

on Oct. 5 2009 at 5:07 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

well publish it!!! lol

i really want to read the rest of it!!!

Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Oct. 5 2009 at 2:12 pm
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks, i rewrote the rest, but it isn't published yet :)

Z3bRUh said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:53 pm
ugh don't stop here!!! keep going!

u gotta way with wordsss

on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:02 pm
BeautifulSimplicity BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
We keep it light, until it's time to go dark. Then we go pitch black.

DANG, THIS WAS GOOD, HURRY UP AND FINNISH it, homeboy got talent! dang, thats all i have to say

on Oct. 4 2009 at 3:57 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
7 articles 3 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

you should finish it.

im absolutely starving for more!

you should also check me out to :)

yelsse<3 said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 2:23 pm
Good poem!! How cute((: