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Save Me

October 31, 2009
By TheRealKaityD. BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
TheRealKaityD. BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Don't wish it were easier, wish you were better."


This pain is tearing through my soul
Ripping through my bones
Shredding my heart
I can't see, Can't breathe
This light is so bright
Shining right into my mind

(chorus)
I need somebody to save me
My mind is telling me to go
but my heart is yelling no
I have no one else to turn to
no one else to run to
i'm screaming so loud, so clear
How much louder until you hear?

Your eyes look right at me
It's like i can finally see
I can finally breathe
Your love is changing my love
I just can't get enough
Stay with me, dream with me

(chorus)

Keep this alive
Make me strong
Help me hold on

(chorus)


The author's comments:
For the first verse & chorus i was really upset. I stopped writing & came back to it a week later & finished writing it when i was in a good mood. I hope people can see how you can feel the same even when your in completely different moods.

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on Jun. 15 2010 at 6:04 pm
BeautifullyBroken18 BRONZE, Del Rio, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Does he watch ur favorite movies?Does he hold u when u cry?Does he let u tell him all ur favorite parts, tho u've seen it a million times?Does he sing 2 all ur music while u dance to purple rain?Does he do all these things like we used 2?"

i like this. Its not too long. Its too the point and its still beautifully written. This should definetely be on the radio :)

on Nov. 25 2009 at 9:43 am
TheRealKaityD. BRONZE, Apex, North Carolina
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Don't wish it were easier, wish you were better."

Thank you so much! :)

on Nov. 24 2009 at 9:41 pm
I LOVE THIS SONG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!