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Just Take Me

November 29, 2009
By momo94 SILVER, Pacifica, California
momo94 SILVER, Pacifica, California
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I'm leaving today,
there's nothing to say.
The world has turned gray,
come another day.

Everything's wrong,
and you're just gone.
The fear is so strong,
the journey so long.

I'm never coming back,
there's no where to go.
Nobody wants me,
I'm all alone.
I want to go home,
I have no home.
Please take me home,
just take me home...

I feel the cold rain,
wash away pain.
Hear you call my name,
and I run again.

Don't want to see you,
but you save me too.
The sun shines so true
and the sky turns blue.

I'm never coming back,
there's no where to go.
Nobody wants me,
I'm all alone.
I want to go home,
I have no home.
Please take me home,
just take me home...

I can't fight you,
take me away.
Just take me home,
take me home today

The author's comments:
Sometimes the things you are running from, are the only things that can save you.

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Kailli BRONZE said...
on Dec. 22 2009 at 6:46 pm
Kailli BRONZE, Brainerd, Minnesota
3 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"He who runs after bus,will soon be tired."
~Alex Resch~

Talented!...that's all I got to say;)

vampluv11 GOLD said...
on Dec. 18 2009 at 10:47 am
vampluv11 GOLD, Saugerties, New York
10 articles 1 photo 59 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go ask Alice.

this poem was reallygood! but i think that it could be improved if the rhyme scheme wasn't so aa/bb and so on... but it's still really good! 4/5 :3