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My Flower
January 5, 2010
A fragile beauty, elegant
as the 4000 year tree stands tall.
I love you, you love me not,
Less adored, must I leave before I fall?
Handpicked by angels - you leave,
Thus your presence flares and dies.
Unnerved by this sudden darkness
I Iove you, yet you tell me lies.
Deaths cavern invites me closer
Whilst I listen to you in despair
You say this earth needs better men
I love you- don't you care!?
'each leaf deserves a grave' you said
Jims story touched your heart,
Yet you stamp me to the sidewalk
Still I love, while you tear my heart apart
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This article has 3 comments.
ephemeral_dream GOLD said...
on Jan. 24 2010 at 3:20 pm
hiya, thanks for the comment, no i haven't written music for it...would like to though :/ x
midnight_compositions SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 7:08 pm
this was really original, I liked it. Kudos for writing a song about love that really stands out as unique. Have you written music for it?
the line about jim's story doesn't really fit - I know but he really wanted to include it as it is his answer to everything.