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Your Dark Smile

February 8, 2010
By sharpshot1 GOLD, Del City, Oklahoma
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sharpshot1 GOLD, Del City, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because its over, smile because it happend" -Dr. Suess

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When the light fades away, u cryed for me to go
when night turns to day, u tried to never show

now i know
your dark desire
now i feel
your dark craddle
now u kill
out your fire
now i steal(hold)
(softly)
your dark smile

you betrayed, you stole,
you became, the dark soul
goodbye goodbye, it will never happen again
goodbye goodbye, your life shall be the end

now i know
you dark desire
now i feel
your dark craddle
now u kill
out your fire
now i steal
your dark smile
(screamo)
AWAY AWAY
AWAY YOU BEAST
AWAY AWAY
YOU BECAME ME
(whisper)
When the light fades away, u cryed for me to go
when night turns to day, u tried to never show

your dark smile
your dark craddle
your dark desire
your dying fire
your(hold)
dark smile

© Greg K., New Lenox, IL

The author's comments:
AFTER I HAD A TOUGH BREAK UP WHEN I FOUND OUT THAT MY CURRENT GIRL FRIEND WAS CHEATING ON ME I WROTE THIS ON A PIECE OF PAPER AND NOW I FOUND IT AND I'M USING IT
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This article has 6 comments.

Darla Johnson said...
on Apr. 24 2010 at 11:04 am

Well Done!

You are a Natural writer. Keep writing you are great! you should come check out my work sometime.

Milo! said...
on Apr. 12 2010 at 5:53 pm
Haha. But yours has so much more detail. My vocabulary isn't that wide :) I don't read enough.
sharpshot1 GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 3:12 pm
sharpshot1 GOLD, Del City, Oklahoma
11 articles 11 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because its over, smile because it happend" -Dr. Suess

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ya well so does yours! lol
Milo! said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 2:02 pm
Not at all! Your work provides so much imagery, which is something mine lacks.
sharpshot1 GOLD said...
on Apr. 7 2010 at 11:36 am
sharpshot1 GOLD, Del City, Oklahoma
11 articles 11 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't cry because its over, smile because it happend" -Dr. Suess

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Thank you Milo! and i checkeout your work very well done! way better than mine
Milo! said...
on Mar. 12 2010 at 6:02 am
I really love this. I really like how everyone can relate to this. I hope you keep writing, because this is great. You should check out some of my stuff. I think you would like it.