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He's A Rainbow

February 17, 2010
By SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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His smile is the sunshine
His smile is a golden ray
His smile is a circle of heaven
Warmth on a cold day

It makes his perfect eyes shine
It’s like a candle flame
It’s something you can stare at
A bright heart it contains

I don’t know how to describe it
It’s that warm and fuzzy feeling
It’s a tingle through your fingertips
It’s the glances you’ve been stealing

His smile is the sunshine
But this you already know
Of course his laugh will be the rain
So together it’s a rainbow


The author's comments:
I wrote this kinda randomly so hoping you like it!

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_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2010 at 3:41 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

I love this poetry! So adorable! Five stars. *****

on Mar. 24 2010 at 7:05 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Ah sha! Thanks, ya made my day :) x like a lot

on Mar. 23 2010 at 5:57 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

Adorable! I loved it and I love your user name.... Check out my work if you ever get the chance!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 4:16 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
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Aww thank you!!!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 3:36 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
54 articles 2 photos 748 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

this made my day! BEAUTIFUL!

on Feb. 27 2010 at 11:20 am
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 534 comments
Sorry that last commet was 2 another prsn :)

on Feb. 27 2010 at 9:59 am
Lost-In-Life GOLD, Whitby, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It's never to late, if it weren't for the last minute many things would never get done!

This is really cute. I especially like the last stanza. I like how it flows.

on Feb. 24 2010 at 1:48 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 534 comments
lol thanks! Yeah it probly wud make me 2 but i got bored so yep!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 6:10 pm
Nikiblue PLATINUM, Bloomfield Hills, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Stupid Is As Stupid Does." -Forest Gump (;
"No one who achieves success does so without the help of others. The wise and confident acknowledge this help with gratitude."

Cute! <3 Its so innocent and pure and yet so adorable haha Great job (:

on Feb. 23 2010 at 5:17 pm
SarClark BRONZE, NC, Connecticut
2 articles 0 photos 534 comments
Shoot! This isn't a song lyric it's just a poem haha

But thanks for the comment!!

on Feb. 23 2010 at 4:27 pm
chocolateharp SILVER, Plaistow, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
"Dear God," she prayed, "let me be something every minute of every hour of my life. Let me be gay; let me be sad. Let me be cold; let me be warm. Let me be hungry...have too much to eat. Let me be ragged or well dressed. Let me be sincere - be deceitful. Let me be truthful; let me be a liar. Let me be honorable and let me sin. Only let me be something every blessed minute. And when I sleep, let me dream all the time so that not one little piece of living is ever lost." - Betty Smith (A Tree Grows in Brooklyn)

This is so sweet; it made my smile. :)