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June 5, 2010
By sweetpea114305 SILVER, Bozeman, Montana
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&ldquo;Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don&#039;t matter and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&rdquo;<br /> -Dr.Seuss

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Raindrops fallin round me,
lightning strikes,
thunder rumbles up in the sky.
But with your arms wrapped around me tight, I know everything will be alright.

I see your eyes and
I see your smile,
And I keep noticing your style.
A love like this some say is too good to be true,
But I guess they don't know you like I do.

© Terrin C., Humboldt, IA

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just the beginning. Revision of the other one by me called ?????. Please leave feedback. Good or bad!
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LoveSickenedRebel GOLD said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 8:30 am
LoveSickenedRebel GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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&quot;Why does everyone think I need a man? Look if you find a guy who is decent, good with kids and has respect for women, call me.&quot; &quot;It is better to have loved, than to have never loved at all.&quot;

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this is so pretty! keep on writing!