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Tell me that you believe in fate

June 22, 2010
By Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)


Verse 1:
We IM almost everyday,
When we chat I try to think of something to say
To match,
Your confidence.
My blood pressure rises when you say my name,
Sometimes I think me knowing you was my destiny.
I know, what I feel is real

Chorus:
Come on baby tell me that you believe in fate,
I think it happened to me yesterday.
When our eyes met,
I knew it right then that maybe…
You could be
I know this sounds cliché
But I could tell right away
That you were …that guy

Verse 2:
Is it just me or do I see,
The guy that your tryin really hard to be-e.
I can’t take it any more.
I like you exactly the way you are-re
The highlights of my day are when we ta-alk.
And I can’t let you go

Chorus:
Come on baby tell me that you believe in fate,
I think it happened to me yesterday.
When our eyes met,
I knew it right then that maybe…
You could be
I know this sounds cliché
But I could tell right away
That you were …that guy

Verse 3:
Here I am and this aint the first time,
I’m so glad that you’re a part of my life.
I am, I really am.
Every time we talk it’s like you stealing my brea-eath
The whole world has stopped, it’s only me and you left
That’s the greatest feeling I have

Chorus:
Come on baby tell me that you believe in fate,
I think it happened to me yesterday.
When our eyes met,
I knew it right then that maybe…
You could be
I know this sounds cliché
But I could tell right away
That you were …that guy


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Thandiwe GOLD said...
on Jan. 19 2011 at 11:22 am
Thandiwe GOLD, New York, New York
13 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just Write It. (follow me on tumblr: thandielove13.tumblr.com)

thanks love :)

on Jan. 19 2011 at 8:18 am
Skullcuffz SILVER, Waupaca, Wisconsin
6 articles 6 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before
--Edgar Allan Poe.


I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity.
--Edgar Allan Poe

This is great.. i love it it makes me smile.. :)

Emilia901 GOLD said...
on Oct. 11 2010 at 8:21 pm
Emilia901 GOLD, Moreno Valley, California
11 articles 4 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Fiction reveals truths that reality obscures." Jessamyn West

The amount of talent conveyed in this song is just amazing! I loved it so much! =^_^=

on Jul. 20 2010 at 8:30 pm
Dancingintherain97, Newport, Pennsylvania
0 articles 4 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
If there is a book you really want to read and it has not been written yet then you must write it. -Toni Morrison

Good Job! :) I liked it!