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August 6, 2010
By sweetpea114305 SILVER, Bozeman, Montana
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Be who you are and say what you feel because those who mind don&#039;t matter and those who matter don&#039;t mind.&rdquo;<br /> -Dr.Seuss

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I don't know how it happens,
but I know that it does.
I know you're in a better place,
You're up above,
I need you,
wanna see you,
I've never felt like this before,
But I know i don't want any more of this,
Feeling,
didn't want to be without you,
but now that i am,
nothin' seems to be the same,
including my plan,
i wish you
could come back to me,
without you i can not breathe,
without you i'll never be the same,
cuz i loved you.

© Laurie T.,Hopkinton, MA

The author's comments:
This is about my great grandma. She passed away on December 31st 09. This song is not finished yet, but I am working on it.
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