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When will I be free

October 29, 2011
By Kimberly12 SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
Kimberly12 SILVER, Oklahoma, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
You'll never get a good experience, when you don't try for the best outcome.


My tears drop off my cheek
Who cares about me
I live to see another day
I wish to see the sun arise
I see no colors,
I taste no food.
We die and die,
And cry and cry.
I am dragged down in chains here!!!
Who will see that I am not who they want me to be.
Who will share the same pain with me,
evryone's watching from the side
they're watching me, taking points from my life
From my life!
That can't possibly be right.
Tell me can't I be my own person
Cause if you took the time to know me
I would have never been withdrawn from you and the rest of my family.
But who listens to me.

There's no such thing as friends in my world
Cause the dictionary don't even know the meaning
Is there any fight in the world
for the people who can't help who
they are
the question is when will we all be free.


The author's comments:
it's basically about my life about war and worlds.

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on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:50 pm
AnimaCordis GOLD, London, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Evil is when the good do nothing"

Oh this is so sad! It's so moving, my goodness this is good!

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:30 pm
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
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And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

I love it!!

on Nov. 25 2011 at 4:29 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

i love this poem!!!! amazing!!! just one suggestion? instead of "we die and die, and cry and cry" maybe "we die and cry, we cry and die" idk. this is really good kim!!