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innocence

May 30, 2012
By Pandora202 GOLD, Gainseville, Georgia
Pandora202 GOLD, Gainseville, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
I live to die so bite me ;P


i may look the part but nothing compares to a shattered heart.I may look joyful, but I'll only rejoice when every body's dead.I'm not so innocent anymore to you am i?you thought we were the picture perfect family but you didn't know how i felt inside.you wonder,"why is she doing this to me?what did i do to her?" well ask yourself just one thing what did i do to deserve you?



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DanielM SILVER said...
on Jun. 14 2012 at 11:16 am
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

Your lyrics are very intersting. Their filled with so much emotion yet their not so complicated. I really like this title. Great Job!!. Suggestion: is maybe captialize some of your words. Other than that. Great job!!