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September 20, 2014
By Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
Xena_Zionne GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
“I'm selfish, impatient and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best.” -Marilyn Monroe

You’re cool, but she’s not
She’s gotter hair tied back
Across the parkn lot
And you stare across the street
You’re hot in Levi jeans
She’s gotter black sweater
and homemade capris
but you still stare across the street
Everybody else is getting along
She stands at the end of the crowd all along
She doesn’t notice you starin across the street at her
In your Levi jeans
She doesn’t notice you makin your way to her
‘cause your cool but she’s not
There’s a billion other girls in this parkn lot
And you stop to speak to me.
Yea he took my hand and danced all night with me.

The author's comments:

Taylor Swift would be singing this song if it was real.

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on Sep. 29 2014 at 3:08 am
Creative-Writer BRONZE, Mesa, Arizona
4 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
We know what we are, but know not what we may be. -William Shakespeare

I like the idea.  It could use some work.  I understand what your saying, and that is good.  I agree with you, it is more of a song, and I'm sure Taylor would be singing it if it were I only have one question...Why isn't it?  I think you should re-read it, fix it's errors, and have it published, maybe even have Taylor Swift sing it!